Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I would say that the comments that I have received so far have been very helpful in improving my writing both in my blog and storybook. Specifically for my storybook, the comments have allowed me to configure my website in a way that is more accessible for the users. Additionally, the comments have given me some great ideas to improve my storybook. For example, because of my comments, I am thinking of making my website more like the common app by creating resumes for my Greek figures, admission requirements, and more details in my intro. I feel like my comments have been helpful for other students. I really try to focus on concrete aspects of their stories that can enhance the story or make it less confusing for the reader. Commenting has also allowed me to interact with others in the class which is something that I have not experienced before in my other online classes. Looking forward, I hope my classmates continue to critique my writing and storybook so that I can continue to improve.

Wikimedia: Commenting has been useful in my progress as a writer and blogger this year.

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